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August 31, 2026



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本期作者:张婷婷



2026年8月29日雅思大作文题目


People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?


题目分析:Report报告类(问题+解决),不要同意/反对,不用表态立场;分析追求工作生活平衡过程的两大问题 + 给出对应解决措施;


关键词解析:


1. keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives other parts of their lives 指代家庭陪伴、个人爱好、休闲社交、休息健康等私人生活,不等于单纯“少加班”;重点是主观追求平衡这件事,不是只描述客观上班很累的社会现象。


2.  What are the problems in trying to achieve this goal


❖ 审题重中之重:in trying to achieve this goal


❖ 限定范围:在努力去实现平衡的过程中遇到的难题


✅正确写:执行计划受挫、现实事务冲突、调整期间心理内耗、计划被突发事情打乱(行动过程里出现的困难)


❌不要写:单纯分析“为什么工作生活很难平衡”的根源原因(职场竞争激烈、老板压榨员工,这是背景诱因,不是“努力追求平衡时遇到的过程性问题”)


范文及解析


Introduction



Nowadays, striking a sustainable balance between professional responsibilities and personal life has become a universal pursuit for modern working adults. However, a tiny fraction of the population can accomplish this goal, while most people are trapped in overwork and life neglect.  This essay will discuss the main difficulties when people try to achieve this objective and propose practical measures to tackle them.


解析
❖ striking a  balance 公平处理; 取得平衡;
❖ fraction n.小部分,微量;
❖ accomplish v.完成,实现;
❖ be trapped in 被困在某处;


译文参考:


如今,在工作职责与个人生活之间实现可持续的平衡,已成为当代职场人士的普遍追求。然而,仅有极少数人能够达成这一目标,大多数人则陷入过度工作、忽视个人生活的困境。本文将探讨人们在试图实现该目标过程中面临的主要困境,并提出切实可行的应对策略。


Body paragraph 1



One major problem when people attempt to pursue work‑life balance is conflicting responsibilities in practice. Even when workers deliberately set aside time for fAMIly and leisure, urgent work tasks frequently intrude on their personal plans. While they are making every effort to stick to their balanced schedule, unexpected deadlines or household emergencies keep disrupting their arrangements. As a result, their well‑intentioned plans are difficult to carry out as originally expected. Another difficulty in reaching this goal is constant mental strain during the adjustment process. Even if people actively manage their time to achieve balance, they constantly doubt whether they have devoted sufficient energy to work or private life. They oSCIllate between guilt over neglecting job duties and regret for missing family moments. This ongoing inner pressure arises directly in the course of seeking balance, instead of merely resulting from a heavy workload


解析
❖ attempt to 尝试,试图
❖ deliberately  adv.故意地;
❖ set aside v.留出,拨出,预留(时间、金钱、资源等以备后用);
❖ urgent  adj.紧急的,急迫的;
❖ emergency   n.突发事件,紧急情况;
❖ oscillate vi.振荡,振动;摆动


译文参考:


人们在争取实现工作与生活平衡时遇到的一大难题,是各类责任在现实层面发生冲突。即便员工刻意为家庭事务与休闲活动预留时间,紧迫的工作任务依旧常常侵占私人日程。尽管他们竭尽全力恪守兼顾二者的生活节奏,但突发的工作截止期限与家庭紧急状况不断打乱安排,使其初衷良好的计划难以按设想落地。实现该目标的另一重阻碍,是整个调整阶段持续存在的心理压力。即便人们已经主动运用时间管理手段追求平衡,仍会频频质疑自己是否为事业与个人生活投入了足够精力。他们时而因疏忽工作职责感到愧疚,时而又为错过家庭时刻心生懊悔。这种持续的内心压力,直接产生于寻求平衡的过程之中,而并非单纯源于繁重的工作负担。


Body paragraph 2



These challenges can be addressed through combined efforts.  To commence with, governments need to enforce stringent labour regulations, supervise enterprises’ working systems, and impose penalties on coMPAnies that force undue overtime work. For companies, clear workplace culture should be built to value employees’ performance rather than extra overtime. This can reduce workers’ fear of missing career advancement when they seek personal time. At an individual level, employees are advised to refine their time-planning tactics and rank daily tasks rationally. Improved self-discipline and higher efficiency allow workers to finish professional duties within office hours, thereby reserving sufficient room for personal recuperation and family companionship.


解析
❖ address v.处理,设法解决;
❖ stringent adj.(规定或条件)严格的;
❖ value v.尊重,重视;
❖ tactic n.策略,手法;
❖ rationally adv.理性地,理智地;
❖ recuperation n.恢复,复原,康复;


译文参考:


上述难题可通过多方协同努力加以解决。首先,政府应当执行严格的劳动法规,监督企业用工制度,并对强制员工过度加班的企业予以处罚。对企业而言,应当构建良好的职场文化,重视员工的实际工作绩效,而非以加班时长评判员工。这能够缓解员工在争取个人生活时间时,对错失职业发展机会的顾虑。在个人层面,劳动者应当优化时间规划策略,对日常工作任务进行合理优先级排序。更强的自律能力与更高的工作效率,可以帮助员工在工作时段内完成本职工作,从而为个人休养与家庭陪伴留出充足空间。


Conclusion



In conclusion, people meet inner conflicts and difficult trade‑offs while striving for work‑life balance. Only through collaborative efforts among individuals, companies and governments can citizens attain a more sustainable work-life balance over the long haul.


解析
❖ strive for v.为……而努力,争取……;
❖ collaborative adj.合作的,协作的;
❖ over the long haul  长期来看;


译文参考:


总而言之,人们在努力实现工作与生活平衡的过程中,会遭遇内心的矛盾以及艰难的取舍。只有依靠个人、企业与政府部门的协同发力,民众方能长期实现更为可持续的工作生活平衡。

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