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The table below shows the energy produced by different powers in 1990, 1996, and 2000.



主体分段方法：按照 <数值> 分段

主体1：oil，natural gas，coal （数值较大）
主体2：nuclear power，hydraulic power（数值较小）
开头段
The table coMPAres the amounts of energy generated from five different sources in 1990, 1996 and 2000.
概述段
Overall, most sourcesexperienced rising trends, resulting inan increase inthe total energy production.In addition, fossil fuelsdominated energy productionthroughout the given period,whilealternative sourcesplayed a comparatively minor role.

思路要点：
- 大部分能源发电量上升，总发电量上升
- 化石燃料发电量较高，其余两种能源发电量较低
Body paragraph 1
The three traditional sourcesaccounted for the vast majority ofenergy production across the three years. In 1990, oil wasthe largest source, generating 70.4 units, and this figurethenincreased steadily to77.2 units in 2000.Althoughnatural gasranked secondin the beginning (66.5 units), its outputplungedto merely 7.4 units in 1996 andreboundedto the highest level at 99.5 units in 2000,overtakingoil to becomethe dominant sourceof energy. Coalranked thirdthroughout the period, with its outputrising significantlyfrom 50.2 units in 1990 to 64.2 units in 2000.
思路要点：
- oil：1990年数据最高(70.4 units)，随后上升到2000年的77.2 units
- natural gas：1990年排第二(66.5 units)→1996年急剧下降到7.4 units→2000年重新上升到99.5 units，超过oil排名第一
- coal：排名第三，从1990年的50.2 units显著上升到2000年的64.2 units
Body paragraph 2
The other two sourcesproduced considerably lessenergy. Hydraulic powerconsistently recorded the lowest figures,fluctuating slightly between0.3 and 0.5 units over the period. Nuclear powergenerated relatively more energy thanhydraulic power, rising from12.1 units in 1990to a peak of16.4 units in 1996, before declining moderately to14.5 units in 2000.
思路要点：nuclear power，hydraulic power
- nuclear power，hydraulic power整体数据较小
- hydraulic power：数值最低，在0.3 units和0.5 units之间波动
- nuclear power：数值相对较大，从1990年的12.1 units小幅上升到1996年达到峰值16.4 units→小幅下降到2000年的14.5 units