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The table below shows the number of international students from different countries in the USA and Canada in March 2002 and April 2004.


开头段
The table coMPAres the number of international students from three different countries (China, the USA, and India) in Canada and the USA in March 2002 and April 2004.
概述段
Overall, Canadaexperienced a significant increasein the number of international students,whilethe USAsaw a slight decline.However, USAattracted a larger number of international studentsthan Canada throughout the given period.
思路要点:
- Canada的国际学生总数显著上升,但USA的国际学生总数下降
- USA的国际学生总数始终超过Canada
Body paragraph 1
In Canada, the total number of non-domestic studentsgrew significantly, risingfrom 59870 to 70004,which represents a 17% increase.This growth was primarily driven bythe substantial increasein the number of Chinese students, whichjumped from5400 to 7850,a 45% increase. Similarly, the number of Indian studentsalsogrew noticeably,rising by 35% to reach2835 in 2004.By contrast,althoughstudents from the USAremained the second-largest group, their figuresgrew more modestlyby 9%during the period,reaching5450 in March 2004.
思路要点:Canada
- total:由 59870 显著上升了17%,达到70004
- China:由5400急剧上升搭配7850
- India:显著上升了35%,达到2835
- USA:两年内学生人数都排名第二,但仅轻微上升了9%,达到5450
Body paragraph 2
Nevertheless,there wasa slight drop of 2%in the number of non-local students in USA, fallingfrom 581600 to 570000.Among them, Indian studentsconsistently remained the dominant group,despitea 9% dropin their numbers, fallingfrom 200000 to 182000.Conversely, Canadian and Chinese studentsrecorded similar increases of 6% and 7%,with their figures reaching116600 and 33170 respectively.
思路要点:USA
- total:小幅下降,从581600 到570000
- India:学生人数最多,但从 200000 下降了9%达到182000
- Canada、China:上升了类似幅度(6%和7%),分别达到116600 和33170
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